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A few large flaws…

Review from We Could Be Heroes →

Harmon Cooper’s writing, having checked out this and Monster Hunt NYC, tends to have a lot of build up… and weak endings. The build up isn’t terrible in and of itself, but could be a bit more condensed. But with as much as he uses the endings need bigger payoff. It’s setting up sequels, but..

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Not bad

Review from Cherry Blossom Girls →

The concept wasn’t bad , kind of reminded me of Super sales on super heroes but the main character pisses me off. He makes me cringe and is to much of a push over at times. Ill give book 2 a try tho

Couldn’t finish it

Review from We Could Be Heroes →

I could not finish this book after giving it more chances than it deserves (3:25:02 in). The main character is cringe incarnate. His power is would be cool if it wasn’t linked to his sense of smell which just seems ridiculously stupid even for a fantasy world. There is very little world building or character..

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