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It was bad.

Review from Hero of Thera →

Many of the story elements are predictable. All supporting characters are cardboard cutouts. I know this is LITRPG but if as a writer you can’t be descriptive and let me feel like I’m in the world you are creating you aren’t doing the job of a writer. If you can’t make me care about the..

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slightly lighter in tone

Review from Harbinger of Ash →

It’s continuing the themes of the previous books, but pushing Lee’s thinking about comparative morality more. I’m seeing a lot of harem aspects in the books I’m listening to, but this one is straight up telling the reader it’s going to happen. I normally have a great love of paladin’s, but I wish someone would..

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Fantastic

Review from Supers: Ex Heroes →

I was drawn int this book from the very beginning. Loved the way that the characters were more than just cardboard cutouts and interacted with flair. Probably the best selling point is that when I finished this one I went out and got the rest of the series including the ex Gods related series.

Amazing!

Review from Delvers LLC →

Loved everything about this book. Actually cheered when one particular bandit met his fate. All of the characters are well written and the plot development, while slow to start, is amazing. 13 hours of my time well spent!

unique twists to genre

Review from Dungeon Lord: Abominable Creatures →

i liked the story line, and general content. To me, the story enhancements (sound effects) where very distracting. More time should be considered to evaluate volume and pitch to narrator. Never overshadow the narrator. This could have easily been 4-12 stars if not for those distractions. Good work Hugo on story line and content.