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Too Much

Review from Hero of Thera →

There is too much description, especially of the MC’s thought process. It’s annoying to have that much pointless fluff. up to chap 15, there is about 2 real chapters worth of matl. He starts his real adventure around then.

Love It

Review from Delvers LLC →

Great story, every interaction seems to be entertaining and the characters feed of each other making this a great story.

Mace the Fearless!

Review from Pathways →

The Black Flame is soon to pass into history. The criminal gang is inexorably being hunted down by Mace and friends. The last of the vermin will be Garya, the leader of the Black Flame and the suspected owner of an artifact Mace needs to complete a quest for his master. Mace’s forces have been..

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omg!

Review from Fateseal →

need book 2, this was absolutely amazing. great character development, great narration and voice acting.

solid conclusion to a great stort

Review from World At War →

while I am unhappy to see this story ending, it was a great climax to Alex’s story. Absolutely love the core 4, Jules, Lainey, Fibble, and the rest of the characters and adventurers. They all could inspire laughter and tears, so solid, believable cast