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Review from Nigmus Online →

so I almost gave up on this one after the first few minutes. there is nothing I hate more then the flash forword opening it feels like you dont believe in your story enough to hook the reader so you rely on a cheap gimmick instead. start your story were it starts dont throw this..

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So gooooooood!!!!

Review from Irrelevant Jack →

I very much so enjoyed this book!!! The soundbooth theater team and Andrea do such good work with their voice acting, and I was especially impressed with them in this book. In regards to the plot, characters, and litrpg elements, i really was rooting for Jack and co and can’t wait to see what happens..

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Overall – Great Book

Review from Nigmus Online →

First Narrators did a great job. Air five* I gave the story four stars because the corporation, The killer, and the detective were almost all non existent till the end; even then it was like “oh by the way.. at the end”. I would of loved to have had more scenes involving the main character..

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Over produced

Review from Shadow Sun Survival →

Way to much background music and sound effects for my liking. Story was very similar to The System Apocalypse where the world is now video game like and need to build up before aliens take over. The narrators did a good job but like I said way to much sound effects. I drive all day..

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