I really enjoyed this, there’s a lot of really fun moments and I swear I laugh my butt off at the sausage machine.it’s really fun watching the empire of Legion grow and seeing how decisions are made.
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ok not great
Review from Planet Kill →
Too Ambitious
Review from Challenge →
Ok I liked to book for a while. It’s humor is mediocre at best but the game system and character progression is cool and there were a number of well written funny moments. The main characters life however comes into play a lot and made the ending feel strained. I can see the build up..
the story of the rpg world is interesting and enjoyable, however the main character is severely lacking in any qualities that would make the reader enjoy sticking through. the story pretty much drags you until you hit the brick wall of the main character’s illuminati family and how he killed them because his mom likes..
I wish it was real
Review from Life Reset: A LitRPG Novel →
this was fun for an hour, when it was a fantasy adventure from the point of a monster. until it became a 14 year olds s&m erotica. the story broke down, the adjectives went from prosaic to a 4th grad vocabulary. everything was described as “weird” . I don’t need 9 minute sexual interludes describing..
Surprised
Review from Super Sales on Super Heroes →
First LitRPG I’ve enjoyed
Review from Dragon Seed →






