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just can’t finish this one

Review from Challenge →

I don’t know what is so bad about this book for me but let me try to tell you.1 – the main characters assholelishness2 – main character’s voice when speaking3 – the stupid way he trys and succeeds in manipulating the NPCs4 – the writing5 – the performance by the narrator is just plain hard..

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Too many female characters

Review from Super Sales on Super Heroes →

There is one male character that gets development and that’s the main. Meanwhile, there’s eight or so female and they’re all annoying, one dimensional and probably infatuated with the main character. He’s so bad at writing female characters, that they take being rated on a scale of 1-10 a compliment.

Language

Review from Dungeon Lord →

So said that another’s can’t write without using so much foul language. Wish the industry would force books to be rated like movies so I know not to waist my time, or money on them

So Much to Like!

Review from Super Sales on Super Heroes →

Great book! Highly enjoyed the humor, action, and creativity. The amount of attention people give to a book is 90% dependent on how well the reader is attracted to the characters, and I gotta say, I loved all the main characters in this book. That was helped by Jeff Hays who did an absolutely incredible..

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It’s…meh

Review from Otherlife Dreams →

It’s just…boring…The story is flat and predictable, the character development is flat and predictable. The only really exceptional bit is Jeff Hayes narration, which is always top tier! I will give credit, having the character start underpowered was a nice touch, but honestly the whole story was just…meh. The very best and most interesting part..

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Almost DNF

Review from War Aeternus: The Beginning →

I almost DNF this one. Production quality was good. Story left something to be desired. Writing quality was mediocre. The use of the word ‘instinctively’ got annoying. The foundation for a good book was here. The implementation was weak. I was glad when it was over.