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Slow start but enjoyable

Review from Challenge →

Took me a chapter or two to fully grasp the situation the MC was in. Lost interest partway into plot simply because the world and NP characters were so irritating and dull and I had other books with more action and depth to the characters. It has me hooked though towards the end after the..

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It was bad.

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Many of the story elements are predictable. All supporting characters are cardboard cutouts. I know this is LITRPG but if as a writer you can’t be descriptive and let me feel like I’m in the world you are creating you aren’t doing the job of a writer. If you can’t make me care about the..

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