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A real guilty pleasure

Review from Everybody Loves Large Chests →

Any additional comments? This is NOT a great work or fiction or even particular well written but it IS funny and entertaining. A truly unique if sometimes low brow take on the LitRPG genre. I can honestly say that I doubt if you have ever read anything like this.

Too many perspectives…

Review from Delvers LLC: Adventure Capital →

Good story overall but alot of the story is from side characters I don’t care about. Need some focus on Henry and Jason. Maybe more from their wives but A and new girl and the others are slowing the story down in a fashion that isn’t necessary for plot or even some basic character development.