There is one male character that gets development and that’s the main. Meanwhile, there’s eight or so female and they’re all annoying, one dimensional and probably infatuated with the main character. He’s so bad at writing female characters, that they take being rated on a scale of 1-10 a compliment.
Review from Dungeon Lord →
So said that another’s can’t write without using so much foul language. Wish the industry would force books to be rated like movies so I know not to waist my time, or money on them
a horrible person wrote this book.he wrote this book for horrible people.if you can take a joke, you may like it.if you laugh at X-Rated evil and perverse acts, performed out of ignorance in crazy situational irony you may love this book…
Review from Super Sales on Super Heroes →
Great book! Highly enjoyed the humor, action, and creativity. The amount of attention people give to a book is 90% dependent on how well the reader is attracted to the characters, and I gotta say, I loved all the main characters in this book. That was helped by Jeff Hays who did an absolutely incredible..
awesome story – top notch nerration! fun and compelling story kept me on the edge of my seat – nerration really brought the characters to life great audio book – well worth a credit buy it – you won’t regret it!
Review from Otherlife Dreams →
It’s just…boring…The story is flat and predictable, the character development is flat and predictable. The only really exceptional bit is Jeff Hayes narration, which is always top tier! I will give credit, having the character start underpowered was a nice touch, but honestly the whole story was just…meh. The very best and most interesting part..
Review from War Aeternus: The Beginning →
I almost DNF this one. Production quality was good. Story left something to be desired. Writing quality was mediocre. The use of the word ‘instinctively’ got annoying. The foundation for a good book was here. The implementation was weak. I was glad when it was over.
Review from Dungeon Lord →
Just sit back and enjoy. Don’t try to get anything but a fun listen out of this book. It is shallow but enjoyable.
this one feels like it pays off in the slow burn of the first bookit’s a really neat concept of how the world building works and is a rather fun listenI had a few lol moments as well
This book is good in many ways and bad in many ways. I have read a few of William’s books and I must say that it’s very noticeable this is one of his older works. As there is many parts of the book that feels like he hasn’t put very much time on thinking through..