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Good but some problems.

Review from Otherlife Dreams →

I liked the story but there were a few problems with narrating to character talk, the soumd volume was lower when the characters spokem which can be annoying if you don’t have headphones in or good headphones.

3,5 Stars

Review from Challenge →

This is an entertaining book. There weren’t any problems with the writing, grammar, or style. There were just a few things that subtracted from the experience and made me count back from a perfect 5 star rating. They are: – Trampling all over D&D intellectual property with evil, subterranean, dark skinned, white haired elves that..

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Great story

Review from Dungeon Lord →

Loved the twist of the dungeon lord being human and not a dungeon crystal. However, the sex scene was weak and better left out. It did not add to the story.

decent book with some problems

Review from Challenge →

I really didn’t enjoy the real world stuff. it was kinda stupid. if you bought your mom a pack of smokes and she killed herself somehow by lighting it on the stove. did you kill your mom? no of course not. that’s not what happens, but it’s pretty close.