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love the narrator, story is a by the numbers self inset power fantasy. it’s all right

Great story with a mix of sci-fi, action and erotica. Want more stories soon hopefully

It took a lot of willpower to finish this book. The beginning is witty and clever. If the entire book was like the first few chapters I would have loves it and recommended it to nearly everyone. Unfortunately it devolved into yet another harem novel condoning casual rape and sexualizing violence. In other words, it’s..

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also the way the writer lack of description in dialog . he said. she said. cs exclaimed, said sullenly. etc. it might just be because he is a new writer. ill get next book and see if the writing improves.

wow I just been a long time since I’ve read something that’s good I can’t wait for the rest of the series and I love how they into connect with all of Williams and Randy’s other books I’m here reading and rereading the series listening to them on audiobooks minutes after I read them myself..

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then he introduces extremely annoying characters and almost tries to make it terrible. it doesn’t seem like the author wanted to write a next book so he made the last of this one so bad nobody else would want a next book either

i loved this book so much just somthing to get me through the work day

The Story has advanced and we are seeing developments in characterization. Narrator is good as always.

I enjoyed the book. I love books that have endings or moments they foreshadow. i didnt see the ending for the real world. The story in the game had a lot of plot points if you payed attention you could guess how it was going, but i thought it was going to be one of..

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did not expect that twist ending at all very nicely done 10/10 would recommend this any day