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good story hampered by stupid writing

Review from Otherlife Dreams →

would have been a wonderful story…if it weren’t for the MC’s insistence on telling the npc’s how to do things. Things they would be doing normally from their point of view. if we’re to believe the story, nobody in the gameworld had ever had to loot a body before, for instance. insanity. did not finish..

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A creepy space man story

Review from Free Fall →

Free Fall is a short story but has all the creep factors a novel has! An astronaut is coming home but isn’t about to contact anyone at all. He opens all channels and gets a little girl and what she says chills him to the bone. From there, he does something very unusual. Great story.I..

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