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Amusing, but ham fisted and in need of an editor.

Review from Delvers LLC →

Show, Don’t Tell. The world of ludus is interesting, but the characters all feel oddly immature for their reported ages and experience. Character background comes from heavy handed internal monologues that often feel out of place. The audio production is good, though they added an odd and quickly annoying echo effect to go with the..

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Quite surprised

Review from Everybody Loves Large Chests →

I snagged this book on a whim because of its interesting title. Was actually really surprised how much I enjoyed it. I found myself laughing out loud several times and actually really enjoyed the story. Really hoping and looking forward to a Vol 2

Dungeon Lord

Review from Dungeon Lord →

Wonderful story put together with skill. My favorite line in this audible… Ed realized he screamed a battle cry that sounded alot like oh shit!loved it The narrators work well together and both are very good at what the do. I requested a copy of this audible free and am happy to give my honest..

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