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Writing reminds me of a 14 year old boy

Review from Delvers LLC →

i really wanted to like this book, let alone the series. But the writing style is just too much. Pointless comments throughout, cursing galore for no other reason than to make the guys seem more "bad a**" I guess, but just makes them sound like juveniles. character development is out of nowhere at times. It..

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A great start to a new series

Review from The Last Warrior of Unigaea →

If you have enjoyed any of Harmon Cooper’s other books within the Proxima Galaxy, including Feedback Loop and Fantasy Online, you need not read any farther as you will want to pick up “The Last Warrior of Unigaea”; the latest release giving us a look at another online world taking place within the same universe…

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LOL

Review from Super Sales on Super Heroes →

Except for the lists (they don’t work well when spoken) it was a fun book and I hope audible gets book 2 soon, and puts the same narrator on it. I found it on kindle, but you really can’t drive and read, or work and read a book at the same time….so here is hoping..

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Description Misleading

Review from Everybody Loves Large Chests →

Based on the description, this sounds like the book is a Pratchettesque comedy. Even the writing and performance styles continue that impression. It is not. The description does warn of gore and sexual situations, but I was not expecting the two to happen simultaneously. Here’s some of the warnings that should have been included: sexualized..

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Only Edgy Like A Teens Diary

Review from Delvers LLC →

This book reads like a 14 year old boy wrote it. You are reminded over and over (and over) about how sad and tragic the main characters are. The need to empathize with them is shoved down your throat and after the third or fourth mention of their tragic history you just stop caring. They..

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