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good book he just does his point counting to much seems like he is just trying fill book space with it

First of all, the narrator did a great job. The story was strange though. People were slaves and they were okay with that. And then there’s the bubbly ditzy woman who’s 2 main desires were to make pancakes and sleep with her master. Offensively stupid.

This is only 3/4 of a story. You never find out who is picking on the protagonist, or why. It seems like someone is just out to screw the guy, no matter what he does, and they are willing to spend the lives hundreds of people and what must be millions of dollars into ruining..

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character development 13dialog. 22originality. 74story. 44addictivity. 81performance. 55 positives:. nonenegatives:. plot holes

second book even better than the furst. great fun, recommended for all litrpg fans and all fantasy fans.

Very entertaining with a good storyline. I love the characters and power structure. A must read

i loved this book, great characters, awesome reader……cant wait for the next book in the series.

Really enjoyed the story and writing. Liked the tie in between business and gaming. Kept me on my toes about what would happen next, how the powers would evolve, and how the store developed.

I read in other comments that it turns into Harem silliness and it does but it’s still very well written. Plus the performance by the narrator really sells it regardless of the story.

It was like a mix of a cliche harem story, spiderman, and SAO, without being too much, or too boring. it kept me listening even at lunch breaks. definitely worth the buy if you like any of these afor mentioned generes. 🙂