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Nice progress

Review from The Last Warrior of Unigaea →

The book definitely ends on a cliffhanger, but felt it was a great short story. The progress moves along well and never felt slow or boring. The descriptive dialogue helps you visualize it and Jeff Hays narration brings it to life very well. Once again great narration and great story.

Great series!

Review from Otherlife Awakenings →

Although some people may not like the whole harem thing, I think the author handled it well and he didn’t make it a whole erotic story with some fights. Other than that it was a very good series with a lot left for another series if he chooses to continue. Which I’m all for :).

I liked it a lot except for

Review from Challenge →

great story and I understand the importance of cliff hangers and similar writing devices but I always feel so bummed out when it ends up feeling like a set up for the next book. that being said SPOILERS SPOILERS SPOILERS!! i didn’t really care about his real life world and the book made it seem..

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