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Too many inconsistencies

Review from Warsinger →

Way too many inconsistencies and stupidity on the parts of the main characters like when they find the first war, singer and zuri, is fighting the giant sandworm. Why is she just slinging the worms? She kills away from her instead of eating them with the war singer.? we already know that it’s almost out..

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Review from Dungeon Crawler Carl →

Dungeon Crawler Carl, my first litRPG story, is structured like a video game replete with stats and health and points and levels but if you ignore all of that, the story feels like a show on a stage. This severely limits world-building. The world does not grow past the sets that change. The dungeon’s design..

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