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Great story with only 1 problem

Review from Mimic & Me →

I don’t like the romance between the spear guy and the tavern girl. It feels forced to me and a bit tone deaf. She go’s around the bar flirting with other men (even if it’s for tips) In front of her husband. And on the same night he decides he decides to leave the author..

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Great Fun

Review from The Dungeon Anarchist’s Cookbook →

The author does a great job of keeping a serial adventure new and exciting at each turn. The characters are fun and the banter is laugh out loud hysterical. The reader brings everyone to life with full figured personalities. Excited for the next story.