This writing style is not for me. There is so much “noise” in the form of random thoughts, predominantly from the female protagonist, that I literally forgot what was going on before the rambling began. Throughout, the point of view is switched from the female character to the male character but it gets fuzzy at times whose perspective we are seeing.
I would have liked the storyline if not for all the chaos. I couldn’t get into liking the female character. There was nothing wrong with her but she felt detached, somehow. It didn’t come through that she really loves anyone. The way she handled business and let people walk all over her was nonsensical.
There is also an unsolved issue, in my mind. Travis said that he had his reasons for not liking her. I didn’t get if that point was just dropped or it got lost in the chaos.
Narration was fine but monotonous. It didn’t really help navigate the characters’ POV.