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Couldn’t get into it

Review from Damascus Station →

Maybe it was the bland narration or the numbing level of detail. The setting in Syria should have been compelling because the real story there is at least that, but this book misses it. The characters are not developed into people. I can’t imagine how a writer could take this story and make it impossible..

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Terrible male narrator

Review from Montana Sanctuary →

This was an excellent story and I feel like the female narrator did a great job using her voice with inflection and desperation as the story unfolded. However the male narrator talked too fast, did not talk with emotion, and lost the love connection that should have been evident in the story. Often, I will..

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Starts off strong

Review from Rescued by the Wolf →

This 2nd book in the series starts off strong. Lots of dramatic tension. The MMC is attractively developed and the FMC is sympathetic without being infantilized. Thereโ€™s decent tension between the two of them. The editing is a little choppy but overall the story is entertaining and satisfying. The narrator is pleasant and has good..

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Ridiculously Long

Review from Diamond Devil →

I loved the narrators, they did a fabulous job. The story is good but ridiculously drawn out. It takes 10 chapters just for the 2 characters to have a one night stand and for her to find out she’s pregnant! What happens in the meantime? Nothing of significance to the story. It’s all filler. So..

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Penthouse Proximity: When Protection Turns Personal

Review from Hands Off →

The following ratings are out of 5:Romance: ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’™โค๏ธHeat/Steam: ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅChemistry: ๐Ÿงช๐Ÿงช๐Ÿงช๐ŸงชStory/Plot: ๐Ÿ“•๐Ÿ“—๐Ÿ“˜๐Ÿ“™World building: ๐ŸŒ๐ŸŒ๐ŸŒŽ๐ŸŒ๐ŸŒCharacter development: ๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐ŸฅฐNarrator(s): ๐ŸŽ™๐ŸŽ™๐ŸŽ™๐ŸŽ™Narration type: Dual Narration ๐Ÿฆธ๐Ÿผโ€โ™€๏ธ Heroine Spotlight: Aurora Bennett Aurora Bennett is determined to build her party planning business on her own terms, even if that means pushing back against her overprotective older brother Max. Her first big event at..

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