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Let me tell you pal every single second of this awful pile of garbage is so cringe and embarrassing to listen to. I HATED THIS BOOK

Very little plot actually happens, there’s very little effort explaining the magic system or world-building, and in general it’s really hard to like any of the characters.

I really like the whole joke of the story. The idea of people getting pre-determined life quests is a little bleak, but the whole thing of bread loaves being calamatously unobtainable is really funny. The reader doesn’t really do voices for the characters, and the character descriptions aren’t super vivid. as the story went on,..

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Not sure why these books had such a high rating. The story wasn’t good and the narrator feels like he phoned it in.

The story dragged on and on, 4, 5, sometimes 6 chapters to say what could have been a 1/2 chapter. Couldn’t finish

The story should have been titled Ben’s 3 Thoughts For 5 Hours. Literally nothing happens except recycled thoughts in Ben’s head. There is no storyline there is no character development. I would be furious if I had wasted a credit on this. The icing on the cake is the narrator can’t get an inflection correct..

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I held out hoping it would get better but book 2 is even worse, Spencer is definitely a big wimp an must have adhd ! Good thing it was a free read or I would have been mad!

all words, no point, no twists, no interest…..I would have returned for a refund if the series had not been free….. returned anyway.

The writing is immature. If you told me that a motivated junior in high school wrote this stuff, I would believe it. Transitions are terrible. Behaviors are not believable. Poor grammar. Also generally poor character development. Story and plot are both shallow. The narration sounds like there is a period after every second or third..

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It was a good story plot, but the performance and just the wording was really odd and corny.