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This guy’s voice is horrible. The altered voices for characters is ridiculously fake and cheery for this type of story. It moves so slow.

yep that’s what it was. boring and just describing everything. it was crap. will get next book on deal

The story was good, but the narration sounded too juvenile. I could not finish the book and just deleted it from my library.

Not sure if it was poor narration or poor writing, but I constantly found myself thinking to myself, “this is bad.”

If you’re gonna have a Japanese inspired setting, in which much of the dialogue is in real Japanese, maybe hire a reader that can pronounce a few of the words? Did every Japanese American actor say no?

not a fan of the reader at all. unfortunately I was told it’s a standalone story but it definitely leaves off for a series.

again not much story progression. and most of the book is a bunch of nonsense about why he COULD but also COULDNT do this or that

again not much story progression. and most of the book is a bunch of nonsense about why he COULD but also COULDNT do this or that

all this guy’s books or the same. im pretty sure its an AI bot. but they are free. so thats something.

Once again Tom Eliot has delivered a pure fantasy story, no real world drama no politics of any kind absolutely nothing to distract you from the world he has built.