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Adequate performance could not save this novel

Review from The Lost Starship →

This felt like a novel with a decent story, but horribly needing am editorial team. Conversations were repetitive and cliche. “Shocking” moments were entirely predictable. Maddox is dangerously leaning towards Jonny Sue territory. Blatantly obvious tactics and strategy were ignored. Oh and my favorite part is that I’ve now learned how to get a women…

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Another Great Story

Review from Awaken Online: Happy →

I thoroughly enjoyed this side story. It makes a great addition to the growing world of Awaken Online. Very interested to see how Dom and his crew are integrated into the greater world. And as always, the narrator does a fabulous job bringing the characters to life.

Could be better! Just O.K

Review from The Wild One →

Storyline was all over the place and heroine was so annoying not that the hero wasn’t. I know men mature later, but really the idiocy of Gareth’s group was ridiculous. Even though TheDuke was in and out of the story, he was the best part. The narrator was not able to make you see the..

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