Slow. 30seconds in the storu as an hour written is horrid.”hands were a blur”.editing editing.
Needs editing
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The whole AO series has been seriously crippled by its overwhelmingly bad narration on audible. This book only highlights that. Very slow.Lot of time spent not really doing anything but complaining, and whining about life. So that got old. Seemed like the same points just got said over and over and over, “doing whatever for..
I downloaded this a couple weeks ago – there was some strange error and it didn’t download correctly. Won’t allow me to delete and redownload, won’t let me play it – just sits in my library taunting me and if I try from the audible site it just asks if I want to open the..
This narrator has the worst accents. Rolls “r’s” like Snoop Dogg rolls J’s, long and thick. I guess he’s aiming for some middle Easter accent, but ends up just sounding dumb. It’s bad and really obnoxious. He also sounds exactly like Kevin Malone from The Office, so that’s another issue. The story is okay, not..
I can’t say I care for David Stifels style, although it works for Fin’s story. The series is adding up to be a very engaging well written piece of sci-fi, where initially I felt like it was just another gamer fiction book. I am now led on an incredible journey in a digital world, complete..
I love the set up of the big antagonist for Finn, getting a peek into some back story, and the set up for some future side stories. The world story is coming together quite well as well, though I’m curious looking at the timeline if Jason hadn’t already created the undead city, or how long..
Nothing is resolved. A bit of levelling and that’s about it. I was very disappointed. Should have been book 1.5 instead of 2.
Story is fresh and exciting. First time I have read this Author. Was so captured by the storyline that continued with second book. I can’t stop listening.
Travis Bagwell has done it again with another simply amazing book. The creative skills are topped only by the amazing character development and second only to phenomenal plot line. I cannot wait for the next Book to come out in fact that’s the only negative thing I would say about this book is that book..
Overall it wasn’t bad and the individual stories the men told were interesting. I guess I just expected more at the end. It seemed rushed and like they were trying to shore it up as quickly as they could.
