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I think this story could have been much better.

Review from The Lost Starship →

There are some nice elements to this story, like the world building and character development; however this novel feels unfinished. Not from a story perspective but from a quality control. First this narrator was terrible. Secondly, the writing felt like something from a creative writing class, lacking real narrative continuity. This doesn’t feel like something..

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Authored like a manga…

Review from The Lost Starship →

The vocabulary used to author this book is rather – juvenile. As if a juvenile got a thesaurus and decided to use all the shiny new words. The phrasing also has much to be desired as it’s written like the English translation of a manga. My wife really liked the book so I guess you’ll..

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Darker and Deeper

Review from Awaken Online: Dominion →

This latest installment takes us deeper into hardships faced by Jason and friends. It also takes us a bit more into how he meets his challenges and what the darkness means for him. Though certainly not a good place to start the series, it is an excellent continuation for those familiar with the earlier books…

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great litrpg

Review from Awaken Online: Catharsis →

Only 2 downsides I’ll mention are that the narrator didn’t seem like the right role for this one. Not that is was bad anyway but his voice sounds older than the teenagers he was reading about. Secondly the engineers story line is pretty meh and added very little to the story for me.