I can’t get past the narrator the story might be great but listening to it puts me to sleep
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There are some nice elements to this story, like the world building and character development; however this novel feels unfinished. Not from a story perspective but from a quality control. First this narrator was terrible. Secondly, the writing felt like something from a creative writing class, lacking real narrative continuity. This doesn’t feel like something..
Authored like a manga…
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The vocabulary used to author this book is rather – juvenile. As if a juvenile got a thesaurus and decided to use all the shiny new words. The phrasing also has much to be desired as it’s written like the English translation of a manga. My wife really liked the book so I guess you’ll..
Cant wait for more
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Darker and Deeper
Review from Awaken Online: Dominion →
This latest installment takes us deeper into hardships faced by Jason and friends. It also takes us a bit more into how he meets his challenges and what the darkness means for him. Though certainly not a good place to start the series, it is an excellent continuation for those familiar with the earlier books…
Edge of my seat!
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love these books
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great litrpg
Review from Awaken Online: Catharsis →
I will keep it short, the narrator is not suited for this story or these characters, it amplifies the cringy-ness already very prevalent in the story. The character faces zero challenges in the game, is not clever or charismatic and the interactions in the real world are somehow even less realistic than those in the..




