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A struggle

Review from The Golden Spoon →

This was a struggle to get through. The last 70 pages were good but didn’t make it worth suffering through the rest. Woof. Well written but the story needed some work. Could’ve been better, needed some more twists and was definitely missing that wow factor

Terrible writing

Review from Eve’s Daughters →

Although the story has some compelling features, it is difficult to get past the mediocrity of the writing. I could not find an original, interesting sentence. She uses worn out cliches and the book’s “mysteries” were clearly foretold in the first two chapters. I am not usually a reader of Christian literature but like to..

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