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Nope

Review from The Runesmith →

I’m sorry but if the main plot point of your book becomes doing this one thing, and it doesn’t get done simply because instead of doing that thing, all of your characters pretty much just say that their going to do that one thing…then the entire book just end up as a waste of time…

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Word salad

Review from The Runesmith →

Story takes up about 1/3 of the words written.,, Just internal musings, constant barrages of system jargon, or repetition of everything else