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Non Native Author?

Review from Möbius 1 →

The dialogue is stilted… word choice more complicated than necessary, often times using more formal speech than a native English speaker. When discussing complex math or physics concepts, the characters over explained, and spoke as if they were trying to sound smart, to show the reader how smart they are. The story itself and the..

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Interesting

Review from Möbius 1 →

Very good, listening to, interesting spin on time travel. A little cheesy in spots. Didn’t like how left too many unanswered questions in the first book. probably won’t get second book cause I don’t have to wait till the third month to hopefully get any answers.