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Not what I expected

Review from An Unexpected Hero →

the story starts out slow and had me hating the main character but the voices and the story were intriguing also I paid for it…. they in suddle ways develop the main character I gained respect for him and then the story really took off. no drastic things happened to change the main character he..

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Interesting, just…

Review from Thresholder: Teaguewater →

Interesting idea, but told in a boring way or distracting way. Very first chapter makes it seem like we are starting the story after his two previous portals, but then we go back to a talk with his sister and start time skipping like crazy. The MC is kinda boring and pessimistic.