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Russian Trope Cringe-Fest

Review from Transformation →

The Gary Sue MC is an idiot, all of his dialogue is only there to vomit exposition as if the reader is too stupid to know what is going on otherwise (unless the dialogue is just him praising his own incredible awesomeness, of course), everything he could possibly ask for and a lot more besides..

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Plenty good enough to get book 3

Review from Shadow Sun Expansion →

The story is engaging enough to keep your attention. The characters have personalities for the most part. There’s enough action, although I personally feel it could have had about 25% more. Perhaps the author felt as I did, that the fights seem to be becoming repetitious. While I did want more action sequences I also..

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