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Too thirsty for me.

Review from Morningwood →

This feels like it was written by a teenager. I like the basic premise and I’m curious where the author is headed with their overall story, but I definitely won’t suffer through any more amateurish descriptions of “enormous boobs”.

Gross belching noises

Review from The Dungeon Anarchist’s Cookbook →

I LOVED the first two books and the narrator. This book I barely made it a half hour in. One of the main characters frequently makes a disgusting belching/hairball noise that just ruined the whole audible vibe for me. I returned it. Might be better to just read this in print.