During this story of the series, it’s mostly looooong, boring, and unnecessay thought monologues. The main character continually……..thinks the SAME, ridiculous and long thoughts about being guilty and protective of the weak and young. The book has good bones, but there is ABSOLUTELY NOoo character development. It seems the author intended a romantic?? Development, between..
The writing is obviously self published. The mix of modern technology like jets and communication devices mixed with fantasy samurai and water ending is too much. Obviously inspired by The Last Airbender. Didn’t care for the 14 year old struggling through school. or the mom of 5 children working on knitting and fish market. Bailed..
The story seemed ok if a little bit simplistic. The story lacked any real depth. But by far, what stopped me from listening was the narrator. It was like listening to Mr Roger’s Neighborhood trying to narrate a serious story and failing miserably. How this narrator got the job is beyond me. Perhaps that is..
again. so bad. its like the author is a divorced dad writing his dream scenario in which he fabricated a military experience and everything always works out. its free but still so bad. im like hate listening to it.
slow again same plot just change the title kill off few people and then some new people to kill off
This is an absolutely terrible series, one dimensional, childish adventure. Steven Seagal could write a better and more realistic story.
Review from Data Jack →
This book was so bad I couldn’t even finish listening to it. The story dragged, the writing felt amateur, and nothing about it kept my attention.
Let me tell you pal every single second of this awful pile of garbage is so cringe and embarrassing to listen to. I HATED THIS BOOK
Very little plot actually happens, there’s very little effort explaining the magic system or world-building, and in general it’s really hard to like any of the characters.
I really like the whole joke of the story. The idea of people getting pre-determined life quests is a little bleak, but the whole thing of bread loaves being calamatously unobtainable is really funny. The reader doesn’t really do voices for the characters, and the character descriptions aren’t super vivid. as the story went on,..