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Plot holes and narrator damaged this one…

Review from Armageddon →

I cannot stand how the narrator voices Bard, makes him so intolerable. Cringed every time. SPOILERS Also, had a big problem with death and taxes party pretty randomly being horrible bad guys with no issue ending their own game most of the book. There could’ve been a justification for this and dialogue about how they..

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A little ridiculous on the hearing

Review from Awaken Online: Dominion →

I know it’s supposed to be entertaining and not realistic but the hearing part was just stupid. The other parts of the book were very good. I’m not sure what purpose the hearing and FTC play in the larger plot but there could have been a much more normal way to cover this plot element.

A decline

Review from Armageddon →

AO was my first foray into LitRPG, and I found Jason’s story very engaging. As the series has diverged from Jason as the main protagonist, I’ve found myself less engaged. The narrator does not fit for the bulk of the characters (most of which are in their 20s or younger) and his work on female..

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