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I enjoy this series, despite its flaws. The world building and characters are pretty good. The stories are fun. I roll my eyes in exasperation ever time he uses the word “instinctively”. If I made a drinking game out of it, I’d probably have liver failure by now.

Composition construction was no better then high school level. Extremely predictable. Plot is so weak it constantly relies upon deus ex machina to resolve its progress. Seriously lazy thought and writing. Narrator is very nearly monotonic, with overtones of melodrama. Not a good experience. Sadly.

I do thoroughly enjoybthis series. the writer may have his favorite lines and descriptive sentences he likes to use over and over again, but at least he uses them well!

This trilogy is filled with magic; earth, sky, light, and black. There is a main antagonist, but he has many ways of getting to the heroes of the story. Eric is the central MC, but the other MCs definitely play very important roles. Like most magic users who are born with a gift, but untrained,..

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I can’t seem to stop listening to find out what’s going to happen with Jason next. The real life drama vs in game drama adds an extra layer of intrigue. Well worth a listen!

Good character building, keeps side stories minimal to keep attention, and adequate world building which im sure will increase as story continues in coming books.

Well written, with excellent performance. Looking forward to the next volume. Plot is refreshing Litrpg, great characters, with sophisticated story.

cool book, nice stories. It cuts the bs out it gets to the good stuff.

Let’s start at the beginning. Imagine a narrator of a biography of Washington who insists on pronouncing his name as Was Hing ton. The narrator, whose name must live in infamy, pronounces the name Gershom ( pronounced Gershim, with a real SH like shalom) as Gers- hom. I couldn’t believe it. Finally, I just settled..

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wow! this psychopath made the mailman look like a Boy Scout. very graphic but a great story, the narrator did a great job.